ESSAY PROMPT

Assess how far Carlos Curbelo’s claim is valid: argue when using fear to persuade people about an issue can provoke resentment rather than engagement, and when a warning may still be effective. Support a defensible position with relevant evidence and explain how it bears on the claim.

Practice adapted from: College Board · AP English Language, 2023, Set 2 ↗ · Question 3, AP English Language and Composition 2023 Free-Response Questions, page 13

Fear can make a danger impossible to ignore, but it does not automatically make people willing to respond. A frightening message may instead create resentment when its audience feels blamed, manipulated, or powerless. Curbelo’s claim is therefore substantially valid, though not absolute: fear is most likely to provoke resistance when it is exaggerated or used without a credible path to action. A warning can still engage people when it identifies a serious, understandable risk and connects that risk to practical choices. The decisive question is not simply whether a message frightens its audience, but whether it turns concern into a sense of shared agency.

In the margins Why this passage works +
“The decisive question is not simply whether a message frightens its audience, but whether it turns concern into a sense of shared agency.”

This sentence states the essay’s governing distinction. It prevents the argument from treating fear as automatically harmful or automatically effective.

Fear-based persuasion can backfire because threat and persuasion are not the same thing. A message that stresses catastrophe but offers no response may leave listeners with anxiety rather than a reasoned next step. If the audience also suspects that the speaker is inflating danger to gain support, fear can weaken trust: people may reject the speaker’s motives instead of considering the underlying issue. And if a warning implies that ordinary people are responsible for a crisis they cannot control, it can feel like an accusation. In each case, the intended emotion—concern about a problem—gets displaced by another reaction: helplessness, distrust, or resentment. The warning may attract attention, but attention alone is not engagement.

The context and construction of John F. Kennedy’s 1961 inaugural address illustrate how a serious warning can be placed within a broader appeal. The National Archives records that Kennedy sought a short, clear address without partisan rhetoric and focused on foreign policy; its account also notes that the speech’s sentences were repeatedly revised and reduced. Rather than presenting danger as a reason to despair, the address called on Americans to confront tyranny, poverty, disease, and war while participating in public service. That combination matters: naming threats could raise their importance, while the call to serve gave listeners a constructive role. The speech’s closing appeal asks citizens to consider what they can do for their country. This does not prove that every listener was persuaded, but it shows a rhetorical alternative to fear without agency: connect a warning to responsibility and contribution. [1]

In the margins Why this passage works +
“This does not prove that every listener was persuaded, but it shows a rhetorical alternative to fear without agency: connect a warning to responsibility and contribution.”

The qualification separates interpretation of the speech’s design from an unsupported claim about how audiences actually reacted.

The Peace Corps provides a relevant subsequent example of action consistent with that appeal, though the sequence should not be mistaken for proof that one speech caused a policy. Kennedy issued an executive order establishing the organization as a State Department pilot program on March 1, and Congress later made it permanent through the Peace Corps Act. These facts show that public-service language was followed by a concrete institutional initiative. They cannot tell us how much the address itself influenced that development. Still, the example supports a narrower point: an appeal that names difficult problems can be more engaging when it points toward a form of participation, rather than relying on alarm as its only persuasive force. [2]

Franklin D. Roosevelt’s 1941 address offers an even clearer example of warning paired with a proposed response. Delivered as war threatened democratic nations, it named freedom from fear as one of four freedoms and described that freedom in terms of reducing armaments worldwide so no nation could attack its neighbors. Roosevelt also urged increased production of armaments and proposed supplying war materials to nations fighting aggressors. These elements reveal a deliberate tension: he warned of danger while advocating measures intended to meet it. The warning was not an end in itself; it helped frame a policy response. This supports the argument that fear can be effective when it clarifies what is at stake and is tied to an intelligible course of action. The address’s later influence is also notable: the Four Freedoms were incorporated into the United Nations Charter after World War II. That development does not establish that fear alone produced international agreement; it does show that the ideas became part of a wider institutional vision. [3]

In the margins Why this passage works +
“That development does not establish that fear alone produced international agreement; it does show that the ideas became part of a wider institutional vision.”

The sentence uses the historical consequence carefully: it identifies significance without claiming that the speech alone caused it.

A serious objection is that too much emphasis on avoiding fear may soften an urgent warning. When a risk is real and immediate, calm language can understate the stakes; listeners might not act if they do not understand what could be lost. Roosevelt’s address supports this objection because it did not conceal the danger facing nations under aggression. Yet the example also limits the objection: its warning appeared alongside specific proposals and a wider account of freedom, security, and democratic opportunity. The lesson is not to remove fear from public argument, but to make the warning proportionate and useful. A speaker should distinguish established danger from speculation, explain why the audience should care, and identify what response is possible. Alarm without evidence can seem manipulative; evidence without a meaningful explanation can seem remote. Both need to work together.

Ultimately, fear persuades most responsibly when it alerts people to a credible threat without treating them as instruments to be frightened into obedience. If a message exaggerates, assigns blame unfairly, or leaves its audience with no meaningful choice, resentment is a foreseeable response and may overwhelm the issue itself. If it explains the risk, recognizes uncertainty honestly, and offers a constructive next step, fear can focus attention and support engagement. Kennedy’s appeal to public service and Roosevelt’s pairing of a warning with policy proposals illustrate this distinction, even though neither example proves a simple causal formula. Curbelo’s claim is therefore valid as a warning about fear’s limits, not as a rule against urgent rhetoric. The strongest argument does not merely make people afraid of what might happen; it helps them understand what can be done.

Why this argument works

The essay qualifies rather than simply accepts or rejects the claim: fear can attract attention, but its effect depends on credibility, audience agency, and whether the warning connects to action. It develops the reasoning before introducing historical evidence, then uses Kennedy and Roosevelt to illustrate distinct ways warnings can be paired with participation or policy. It also limits its causal claims: the later Peace Corps program and incorporation of the Four Freedoms into the UN Charter are relevant context, not proof that a speech alone caused those outcomes. The counterargument—that urgent danger may require forceful language—is answered by distinguishing forceful, evidence-based warning from alarm without a useful response.

A CLOSER LOOK

The revision, explained

BEFORE

Roosevelt’s speech proves that fear makes people support action, and the Four Freedoms later became part of the United Nations Charter.

AFTER

Roosevelt’s address paired a warning with proposed measures, and the Four Freedoms were incorporated into the United Nations Charter after World War II. That later development shows the ideas’ institutional reach, but does not establish that fear alone produced international agreement.

The revision replaces an unsupported causal claim with two verifiable facts and a measured interpretation. It makes clear what the evidence supports—and what it cannot prove.

NOW IT’S YOUR TURN

Try the idea.

Choose a real public warning about a risk. In one paragraph, identify the threat, the audience, and any action the message proposes. Then explain whether the warning is likely to create engagement or resentment, using the essay’s criteria of credibility, agency, and a constructive response. Avoid claiming an effect on audiences unless you have evidence for it.

See the self-check +

A strong response distinguishes what the message says from what its audience actually did. It explains how the warning’s evidence and proposed action could influence reception, acknowledges any limits in the available information, and reaches a qualified judgment rather than assuming that alarming language necessarily persuades.

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