ESSAY PROMPT

Argue how far Naomi Osaka’s advice to stay present and enjoy the journey is valid. Develop a defensible position that considers both the value of attending to current experience and the limits of doing so when reflection, preparation, or future responsibilities matter.

Practice adapted from: College Board · AP English Language, 2025, Set 1 ↗ · Question 3, page 13

Advice to stay present and enjoy the journey is persuasive because attention to the present can make people more perceptive, resilient, and capable of acting well. Yet it becomes misleading if “being present” means ignoring consequences or refusing to prepare. The strongest version of Naomi Osaka’s advice is therefore not to abandon the future, but to meet the current moment fully while keeping future responsibilities in view. Presence is valuable as a way to engage with experience; it is not a substitute for planning, reflection, or accountability.

In the margins Why this passage works +
“The strongest version of Naomi Osaka’s advice is therefore not to abandon the future, but to meet the current moment fully while keeping future responsibilities in view.”

This is the essay’s qualified thesis. It defines what the advice means and signals the balance the body paragraphs will defend.

First, attention to what is happening now can protect people from being governed by pressures they have not examined. In his 1961 farewell address, President Dwight D. Eisenhower warned that the defense establishment and arms industry could exert unwarranted influence, and argued that citizens needed to stay alert to protect liberty and democratic processes. His warning shows why attention matters beyond personal well-being: citizens who focus only on immediate convenience may fail to notice institutions shaping their choices. Being present, in this civic sense, means observing current conditions carefully enough to question them. That awareness does not tell citizens what every policy should be, but it gives them a better chance to make considered judgments rather than simply accept what is familiar or urgent.

Presence also makes sustained work more meaningful because large achievements are built out of particular acts of attention. NASA reports that Hubble has made more than 1.7 million observations and that its discoveries have appeared in over 23,000 peer-reviewed papers. These results did not arrive all at once: they depended on researchers interpreting observations and developing knowledge over time. The example supports enjoying the journey not because every moment of difficult work is enjoyable, but because the work’s value can be found in the inquiry itself, not only in a final discovery. A person who treats every present task merely as an obstacle on the way to success may miss opportunities to learn from it and may find achievement less satisfying when it finally comes.

Still, attention to the present must be joined to preparation. Hubble’s continued usefulness depended not just on observing the sky but also on deliberate maintenance: NASA reports that five astronaut servicing missions added instruments and replaced or upgraded aging parts, extending the telescope’s lifetime. This example complicates any advice that sounds like “just enjoy what is happening now.” The mission’s future depended on anticipating what would wear out and acting before those problems made the telescope less useful. Preparation does not necessarily pull people away from the present; it can be a responsible response to present evidence. Enjoying a journey should not mean ignoring the work that allows it to continue.

In the margins Why this passage works +
“Preparation does not necessarily pull people away from the present; it can be a responsible response to present evidence.”

This sentence explains the example’s relevance: servicing work looks ahead, but is prompted by present knowledge of aging equipment.

Reflection is another necessary limit on pure present-mindedness. People need time to review what happened, recognize mistakes, and adjust their next choices. Eisenhower’s address itself illustrates the significance of looking back: delivered as he left office, it assessed risks he believed the country needed to confront beyond his presidency. He urged Americans to preserve resources for future generations rather than consume them for present convenience. That warning identifies a moral cost of living only for the moment: people may benefit now by shifting burdens onto those who come later. Reflection makes it possible to see such a pattern and change course. The point is not that enjoyment is selfish; it is that enjoyment becomes irresponsible when it depends on neglecting foreseeable harm.

A serious objection is that constant planning can also damage a life. Someone preoccupied with future performance may fail to notice relationships, discoveries, or simple pleasures available now. This objection is compelling: preparation should serve worthwhile aims, not become an endless demand to optimize every hour. But it does not require choosing the present over the future. Eisenhower’s call for citizens to remain alert shows that attention can involve both immediate observation and long-range concern. Likewise, Hubble’s observations are part of an ongoing scientific effort that includes both careful work in the moment and maintenance for continued use. These cases suggest a better balance: plan enough to meet real responsibilities, then give attention to the task or experience actually before you. The danger is not planning itself, but allowing anxiety about outcomes to consume all present experience.

In the margins Why this passage works +
“The danger is not planning itself, but allowing anxiety about outcomes to consume all present experience.”

The counterargument is acknowledged, then narrowed. The essay rejects excessive planning without treating all preparation as harmful.

Osaka’s advice is valid to a considerable extent when understood as an invitation to participate fully rather than to live carelessly. Present attention can help individuals recognize what is happening, find meaning in sustained effort, and make informed choices. Yet reflection and preparation matter because present actions shape future conditions, sometimes for people who cannot speak for themselves. The journey is not separate from its destination: how people act along the way helps determine what destinations remain possible. To enjoy the moment responsibly is therefore to be attentive without becoming short-sighted—to appreciate current experience while remaining willing to learn from the past and prepare for what comes next.

How the argument works

The essay qualifies the advice rather than simply accepting or rejecting it. Its thesis defines presence as active attention, not disregard for the future. The body develops that position in stages: civic awareness and meaningful effort show the value of attention; Hubble’s maintenance and Eisenhower’s warning about future resources establish the limits of present-only thinking; the counterargument recognizes that excessive planning can also diminish life. Each example is connected to the claim through an explanation of its mechanism. In your own argument, make that connection explicit: do not assume a fact proves your point merely because it concerns the same topic.

A CLOSER LOOK

The revision, explained

BEFORE

Osaka is right because people should enjoy the present, but they should also plan for the future.

AFTER

Osaka’s advice is valid when presence means engaging fully with current experience, but it is incomplete if it excuses neglect of foreseeable responsibilities; the best approach joins attention to the moment with preparation for what follows.

The original statement names two sides but does not explain their relationship or establish a defensible position. The revision defines the key idea, identifies its limit, and states a principle that can organize the evidence.

NOW IT’S YOUR TURN

Try the idea.

Write a 150–200-word paragraph responding to this claim: “Planning for the future makes it impossible to enjoy the present.” Use either the Hubble servicing example or Eisenhower’s warning about preserving resources. Explain how your chosen evidence supports a qualified response, and include one sentence acknowledging a reasonable counterargument.

See the self-check +

A strong response will take a clear but qualified position, accurately describe the selected evidence, and explain the connection between that evidence and the claim. For example, Hubble’s servicing missions show that planning for future usefulness can respond to present needs rather than prevent engagement with current work. The paragraph should also recognize that excessive planning can crowd out present experience, then distinguish that problem from responsible preparation.

Sources and evidence