ESSAY PROMPT

Write a developed argument answering this question: Should Social Platforms Do More to Protect Young Users' Privacy?. Explain the roles of platform design and age-related privacy protections without generalizing protections for under-13s to every teenager. Use concrete U.S. examples and the referenced evidence. Explain how the evidence supports your reasoning and address a significant limitation or competing view.

Social platforms should do more to protect young users’ privacy, but “more” should mean safer default design and protections that reflect age—not treating every teenager as a child with no independence. Platforms decide what information they collect, how long they retain it, and whether a young user must actively search through settings to limit exposure. Those choices shape privacy before a parent or teenager can intervene. A sound policy therefore combines stronger limits on unnecessary collection with clear, age-appropriate controls. It should recognize that young people use online services for connection and creativity while reducing the amount of personal information platforms make available for commercial or social use.

The scale of young people’s participation makes privacy a practical concern, not a remote possibility. Pew Research Center’s 2025 survey found that roughly two-thirds of U.S. teens ages 13 to 17 had used AI chatbots, including about three in ten who used them daily. The same survey found that roughly nine in ten teens had used YouTube. These figures do not show that the services misused anyone’s information. They do show that young people interact with digital platforms frequently and across different kinds of services. When use is this widespread, privacy should not depend entirely on each individual teen anticipating every data risk and locating a setting after signing up.

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“These figures do not show that the services misused anyone’s information.”

This sentence limits the inference drawn from usage statistics. High use establishes the importance of privacy protections, not evidence of a specific violation.

A privacy-protective design would make restraint the default rather than a hidden option. A platform can collect only information necessary to provide a service, avoid making a young person’s profile broadly visible by default, and explain settings in language a teenager can understand. This argument is about the design choices platforms control; the survey figures do not establish which particular settings are currently used or prove that one design prevents harm. Still, their significance is clear: if young people are regular users, a system that requires every user to find and change complicated defaults places the burden on the people with the least control over the system. Better defaults reduce that burden without banning access.

Age-specific rules are also necessary, and the distinction between children and teenagers matters. The Federal Trade Commission explains that the Children’s Online Privacy Protection Act gives parents control over information websites collect from children and that its rule adds protections and procedures for covered companies. The FTC also notes that COPPA may apply to some general-audience sites, not only sites expressly aimed at children. That framework illustrates why age and audience matter: a child-focused legal safeguard should not simply be treated as a complete privacy policy for every 13-to-17-year-old. Teenagers need meaningful privacy protections too, but policies should be designed for their different capacities and growing independence.

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“That framework illustrates why age and audience matter: a child-focused legal safeguard should not simply be treated as a complete privacy policy for every 13-to-17-year-old.”

The distinction prevents the argument from overgeneralizing COPPA. It supports age-aware policy without claiming the law applies identically to all teenagers.

That distinction favors graduated protections rather than a single age gate. Younger children may need stronger parental involvement and tighter limits on collection, while teenagers should receive understandable choices about visibility and data use, with sensitive options set protectively by default. The FTC’s description supports the narrower point that child privacy receives a specific legal framework and that determining coverage can involve a site’s audience. It does not establish a particular legal rule for all teenagers. A responsible platform should therefore avoid presenting COPPA as if it automatically governs every teen account, while still applying privacy-conscious design to teen users as a matter of good practice.

A serious counterargument is that strict protections can interfere with teenagers’ autonomy and with the benefits they get from online life. Pew Research Center’s 2025 survey found that 74% of teens said social media helped them feel more connected to friends’ lives, and 63% said platforms gave them a place to show creativity. These findings complicate any proposal to restrict young users broadly. They do not, however, show that extensive data collection is necessary for connection or creative expression. The better response is to preserve those uses while limiting unnecessary collection and default exposure. Privacy controls should protect users without shutting down ordinary participation.

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“They do not, however, show that extensive data collection is necessary for connection or creative expression.”

This is the rebuttal’s central reasoning: reported benefits of social platforms support preserving access, but do not establish that broad data collection is required.

The same survey also cautions against claiming that social media affects every teen in the same way. Forty-five percent of teens said social media hurt the amount of sleep they got, while about one in five said it hurt their mental health; the largest shares described social media’s effects on mental health and grades as neutral. These are teens’ reported views, not proof that platforms caused a particular outcome, and privacy is not identical to well-being. Still, the mixed responses support a measured policy: avoid using broad claims about harm to justify blanket bans, but do not use positive or neutral experiences as an excuse to leave privacy entirely to individual users.

Platforms have more power than young users to set defaults, explain data practices, and decide what information is retained. That asymmetry is a reason for companies to take responsibility, not a reason to remove teenagers’ agency. U.S. policymakers should maintain child-specific privacy protections while encouraging clear, developmentally appropriate safeguards for teens; platforms should minimize collection and make privacy-preserving choices easy to understand and use. Pew’s surveys describe use and reported experiences, not the effects of a particular privacy rule, so they cannot determine the precise policy that works best. But they establish the stakes: young people are regular users with varied experiences. Stronger privacy-by-design can protect them without treating all online participation as dangerous.

How the argument works

The essay makes a qualified claim: stronger protections are warranted, but age-specific rules should not erase teenagers’ autonomy. It uses survey findings to establish widespread use and varied experiences, then explains what those facts do—and do not—show. The FTC example grounds the distinction between child-focused legal protections and a broader case for teen safeguards. The counterargument is taken seriously by recognizing social media’s reported benefits, then answered by distinguishing access from unnecessary data collection.

A CLOSER LOOK

The revision, explained

BEFORE

Social media is harmful to teenagers, so platforms must protect them.

AFTER

Platforms should minimize unnecessary data collection and make privacy-preserving choices easy to use, while retaining the connections and creative opportunities many teens report.

The original claim is absolute and conflates privacy with mental-health effects. The revision specifies the platform actions being argued for and acknowledges evidence that teens also experience benefits.

NOW IT’S YOUR TURN

Try the idea.

Write a 120–150-word counterargument and response about whether age-based privacy settings should require parental involvement for teenagers. Use one finding from the essay, explain what it supports, and identify what it cannot prove.

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A strong response should recognize that parental involvement may help younger users navigate privacy choices, while noting that teenagers’ growing independence makes a single parent-controlled approach too broad. The FTC’s description of parental control under COPPA supports age-specific protection for children, but does not establish that the same model should govern every teenager. The response could also note that 74% of teens reported feeling more connected to friends’ lives through social media. That finding supports preserving access to useful social experiences; it cannot prove that any particular privacy setting causes connection or that broad data collection is necessary. A balanced proposal would pair protective defaults with clear, understandable choices for teens, explaining how this approach aims to protect privacy while respecting increasing autonomy.

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