Practice Essay #2’s character-and-context prompt using Frankenstein. Argue how family background, education, and social acceptance shape both Victor and the Creature, and examine why their responses to their circumstances diverge or change. Use their contrasting experiences to evaluate what the novel suggests about personal agency: to what extent can either character become the author of his own life?
Practice adapted from: MIT OpenCourseWare · Major English Novels — writing assignments ↗ · Essay #2, second topic
Victor Frankenstein and the creature begin from radically different positions. Victor grows up within a family that treats care for a dependent child as a serious duty; the creature is brought into life by Victor and immediately left without care. Victor’s education gives him unusual power to act, while the creature’s exclusion denies him ordinary recognition and companionship. These conditions shape their choices, but do not dictate them. Victor repeatedly decides whether to accept responsibility, and the creature decides how to answer rejection. Shelley presents agency not as freedom from circumstance, but as the constrained capacity to respond to it. Because Victor has greater knowledge and power, his failure of care carries greater responsibility; the creature’s suffering explains his anger without making revenge inevitable.
In the margins Why this passage works +
“Because Victor has greater knowledge and power, his failure of care carries greater responsibility; the creature’s suffering explains his anger without making revenge inevitable.”
This thesis makes a qualified comparison: circumstance influences both characters, but Victor’s greater power gives him greater responsibility, while the creature retains agency.
Victor’s childhood gives him a vivid example of affection and obligation. Recalling his parents’ tenderness, he describes their understanding that they owed care to the helpless child they had brought into the world. He remembers being guided toward patience, charity, and self-control. This upbringing cannot guarantee that he will act well, but it makes his later neglect especially significant: when his experiment succeeds, he does not offer his creation the attention and guidance that shaped his own life. Shelley thus makes Victor’s family background a measure of his failure. He has experienced the influence a creator can have on a dependent being, yet declines to apply that lesson when he becomes a creator himself. His privilege does not make responsibility automatic; it makes his abandonment harder to excuse.
Victor’s education sharpens his ability to create while failing to discipline his ambition. He becomes absorbed in physiology and in investigating the processes associated with life and death. His learning is intense and purposeful, but his attention narrows to the question of how life might be produced. The failure is not that he studies nature; it is that he treats making a living being as the end of the task, without considering the care that must follow. Education expands his practical power but does not, by itself, provide ethical judgment. Victor could have joined inquiry to responsibility. Instead, he behaves as if achievement releases him from obligations to the life he creates. His education therefore shapes not only what he can do, but also the dangerous imbalance between capability and judgment.
The creature has no family to teach or protect him, but he demonstrates an education of another kind in the account he gives Victor. He argues that a creator owes his creation care and justice, invokes the contrast between Adam and the fallen angel, and appeals to the principle that even an accused person should be allowed to defend himself. This does not establish the steps by which he acquired his learning; the scene instead shows what he has made of his understanding. He can reason, choose examples that make his claim intelligible, and ask to be judged after being heard. His learning gives him language with which to resist Victor’s power, but it cannot compel Victor to recognize him. In this encounter, the creature tries to become an agent and a speaker rather than merely the object of another person’s fear.
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“This does not establish the steps by which he acquired his learning; the scene instead shows what he has made of his understanding.”
The analysis distinguishes the creature’s demonstrated reasoning in this encounter from an unsupported claim about the process by which he learned.
Social rejection makes that effort harder and helps explain the creature’s movement from hope toward hostility. He describes Victor’s abhorrence, the hatred he expects from other people, and the barren places where he has taken refuge. He asks whether he should hate those who reject him, then threatens to make others share his misery. The shift matters: exclusion shapes his view of other people, but his threat turns suffering into a reason to inflict suffering in return. His plea also reveals that another course remains imaginable; he asks Victor to listen and considers the possibility of living harmlessly. Shelley makes the creature’s anger intelligible without presenting revenge as unavoidable. Isolation constrains his sense of possible belonging, but his own words show that he understands the moral difference between seeking a life and causing harm.
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“Isolation constrains his sense of possible belonging, but his own words show that he understands the moral difference between seeking a life and causing harm.”
This sentence links rejection to the creature’s outlook while explaining why that context does not erase the moral significance of his threat.
Victor’s response to loss shows that recognizing guilt is not the same as repairing its consequences. After William and Justine die, he feels remorse and understands that his actions have brought grave evils. Yet he retreats from human company and becomes consumed by fear and hatred. His grief is real, but it does not become an effort to care for the creature or to acknowledge his responsibility to others. When the creature later asks him to listen, Victor responds with rejection and aggression. That encounter presents a choice: he can hear the being whose life he began, but refuses even to consider its plea. The creature’s request, meanwhile, shows that he has not yet abandoned the hope of being heard. Both characters recognize suffering, but recognition alone does not determine what they do next.
The contrast between the characters is therefore unequal as well as tragic. Victor begins with family affection, education, and social standing; his act of creation gives him exceptional power over another life. The creature begins without family or acceptance and has far less ability to secure a place among people. Their choices are not equally free, and their responsibilities are not identical. Victor has more power to prevent harm and a clearer model of care, so his abandonment has particular weight. Yet the creature’s threats show that rejection does not dictate every action. His learning and eloquence make his claim for justice compelling, but do not make his decision to threaten others just. Shelley grants the creature agency without pretending that his opportunities match Victor’s.
In the margins Why this passage works +
“Victor has more power to prevent harm and a clearer model of care, so his abandonment has particular weight.”
The comparison weighs responsibility according to power and experience rather than treating both characters’ choices as equally free.
Shelley’s answer to who authors a life is qualified. Neither character chooses his starting conditions: Victor inherits a loving home and an education that enlarges his power, while the creature is created without care and met with rejection. Yet both make consequential choices within those limits. Victor could treat creation as the beginning of a duty; the creature could refuse to turn misery into a threat against others. Their choices then narrow one another’s possibilities, helping produce a cycle of fear and harm. Agency, in the novel, is neither complete independence nor an excuse to ignore circumstance. It is the limited but real capacity to respond. Shelley warns that when powerful people evade responsibility, they can help make another being’s isolation more destructive, even though that being remains accountable for what he chooses to do.
How the argument works
The essay defines agency as constrained but consequential, then tests that claim against Victor’s upbringing and education, the creature’s reasoning and learning as shown in his appeal, their responses to rejection and grief, and their unequal power. It avoids claiming details about how the creature acquired his knowledge that the analyzed encounter does not establish. Each example connects circumstance to choice without treating influence as destiny. To strengthen this kind of analysis, identify what a character could do in a specific scene and explain why that choice matters to the thesis.
The revision, explained
The creature has no family to teach or protect him, but Shelley gives him a voice with which to challenge the role others impose on him. When he confronts Victor, he asks to be heard before being condemned, presents himself as once benevolent, and argues that his creator owes him care and justice. This appeal demonstrates his capacity to reason about his circumstances and make a claim on another person; it does not establish a particular account of how he was educated. The distinction matters because the novel makes his argument in this encounter clear while leaving the details of how he acquired his knowledge outside it. By insisting on an opportunity to speak, the creature tries to become more than the object of Victor’s fear and judgment.
The creature has no family to teach or protect him, but he demonstrates an education of another kind in the account he gives Victor. He argues that a creator owes his creation care and justice, invokes the contrast between Adam and the fallen angel, and appeals to the principle that even an accused person should be allowed to defend himself. This does not establish the steps by which he acquired his learning; the scene instead shows what he has made of his understanding. He can reason, choose examples that make his claim intelligible, and ask to be judged after being heard. His learning gives him language with which to resist Victor’s power, but it cannot compel Victor to recognize him. In this encounter, the creature tries to become an agent and a speaker rather than merely the object of another person’s fear.
The revision addresses education directly by analyzing the creature’s reasoning, allusions, and appeal to legal fairness in his encounter with Victor. It explains how his demonstrated learning shapes his attempt to assert agency while avoiding unsupported claims about how he acquired it.
Try the idea.
Choose a scene in which Victor or the creature responds to another person’s suffering. In four or five sentences, identify the circumstance shaping the character, describe the choice made, and explain how the scene supports or complicates the essay’s argument about agency.
See the self-check +
A strong response distinguishes a character’s circumstances from the character’s action. It names a specific moment, explains how circumstances constrain or influence the response, and shows why the choice still matters. It should connect that reasoning to a qualified claim about agency rather than treating background as either destiny or irrelevant.
Sources and evidence
- Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein · Project Gutenberg