ESSAY PROMPT

Practice integrating one short quotation or paraphrase into a paragraph with analysis.

Choose evidence for a reason

Before copying a sentence, write down the point your paragraph needs to establish. Then ask what kind of source material would help: a precise phrase for close reading, a finding that needs concise restatement, or a larger argument that needs a short overview. Purdue OWL distinguishes quotation, paraphrase, and summary by how closely the writer’s words follow the source. These are different tools, not three decorative ways to add authority. A quotation can preserve wording worth analyzing; a paraphrase can convey a specific idea in your syntax; a summary can orient readers to a broader argument. If none advances your point, leave it out.

Give readers a frame

A quotation should enter a sentence that tells readers who or what is being represented and why the passage matters here. Avoid dropping a quotation between two unrelated sentences. In a literary analysis, a frame might identify the speaker or moment in a scene before a brief phrase appears. In a research paragraph, it might identify the report and the finding’s relevance. The frame should be accurate and proportionate; do not suggest that one sentence represents an entire source. Purdue notes that quoted words must match the source exactly and be attributed. Check punctuation and the assignment’s citation style, because formatting conventions differ.

Explain what the evidence does

After evidence, write your own explanation. Consider which word, contrast, pattern, or detail supports the claim; what interpretation it permits; and what qualification remains. For example, in a fictional analysis of a character who calls a room “borrowed,” do not stop at observing that the word appears. Explain how “borrowed” can imply temporary possession, then connect that implication to the character’s uncertainty, if the surrounding scene supports it. The example is invented for practice. The analysis is not a claim about a real text. A reader should be able to distinguish the source’s words from your inference and see the reasoning between them.

In the margins Why this passage works +
“After evidence, write your own explanation.”

This sentence demonstrates the lesson by making the writer’s reasoning visible instead of relying on a formula.

Paraphrase by rebuilding, not swapping

A paraphrase is not a source sentence with a few synonyms substituted. Read the relevant passage, set it aside, explain its idea from memory in language suited to your paragraph, and compare your version with the original for accuracy. Preserve the source’s qualifications and attribute the idea even when no words are quoted. If the wording remains close or distinctive, quote a short portion or revise again. Purdue’s guidance says paraphrases and summaries still require attribution; Illinois also advises writers to comment on borrowed material so the reader sees the writer’s own purpose. Your wording can be fresh while the underlying idea still belongs to its source.

Audit the balance of voices

Highlight borrowed words and ideas in one color and your explanation in another. The page need not contain equal amounts, but the reader should see why each source appears and what you make of it. Illinois’ integrating-sources guide recommends introducing and commenting on borrowed material and explaining a quotation’s relevance. Use that check to revise: remove evidence that does no work, add context where attribution is unclear, and make your analysis more specific than “this proves my point.” Purdue recommends using quotations sparingly when there is a reason to retain the original language. The final paragraph should remain intelligible as your argument, with citations marking where evidence enters it. Citation format is a separate layer from integration. Follow the style and source details required by the assignment, and make sure readers can locate the source. A polished lead-in does not substitute for a citation, just as a citation does not explain why the evidence matters. Treat attribution, accuracy, and analysis as three checks that work together.

NOW IT’S YOUR TURN

Try the idea.

Revise a draft sentence or paragraph using this guide. What specific change makes the reasoning clearer to a reader?

See the self-check +

A successful revision states a focused point, connects supporting material to that point, and explains the relationship in the writer’s own words. The best answer depends on the assignment and evidence; there is no single required sentence pattern.

Sources and evidence